Hi Guys,
Sorry if I've been a tad busy with the writing competition but I promise I'll get back to normal after Feb 1st! lol
Meantime take a look at this...
Yet another Press Release.
http://www.briefingwire.com/pr/meet-the-finalists-of-the-marsocial-author-of-the-year-contest
laters...........
Saturday, 25 January 2014
Thursday, 9 January 2014
Competition Time!
Hey Guys,
I've been a tad busy lately and not posted for a while, however I want you all to know why I'm such a happy bunny.
I entered a competition at MARsocial and have actually got through as a finalist! I sent a link below if you want to take a look but I'll post the excerpt from the book I entered so you can read it for yourself.
If you like it please let me know. As you know the first two book(s) are available on Smashwords for free. All the books are available on both Amazon and Smashwords.
This excerpt is taken from Prophecy's Heir, the first book of The Tessellation Saga.
The drizzle began to ease off as the wolf finally stopped
above a small decline in the forest floor.
Bending almost double Jed placed his hands on his knees and threw up,
his exertion making him sick; finally, with his stomach empty, he stood
straight and stretched his back looking through a gap in the canopy high above
him at the now clear sky, glad that at last the rain had stopped. He had not had as much enforced exercise in
years and was thoroughly exhausted, a gentle whine from Blue brought his gaze
back to earth; the wolf was standing over something in the bracken.
In the darkness before the dawn, the birds began to sing in
praise of the new day.
‘Journey’s End!’ Jed
exclaimed as he recognised what seemed to be the body of a girl. More slipping than climbing down the wet
muddy slope, he reached the body and tearing off his coat, he threw it to one
side as the wolf turned toward the forest as if on guard. The girl was lying on her side with blood
still slowly trickling from a raw wound just below her shoulder and pooling
beneath her.
‘She’s not dead boy,’ Jed said aloud, more to himself than
to the waiting wolf, ‘but she ain’t gonna be with us fer long,’ he added, as he
brushed away the myriad of tiny bugs already gathered and feeding off the nasty
wound in her back. Gently, turning her
over, he noticed her extended belly.
‘G’awd’s Strewth,’ he blasphemed, ‘she be young to be this way,’
tenderly; he brushed the hair from her face and covered her dying form with the
blanket. A soft moan escaped her
lips. ‘Miss… miss…,’ Jed began as her
eyes fluttered open. ‘I’ll stay with
yer, you’ll no be alone…,’ he cuddled her to his chest as best he could,
suddenly thinking of Mayan, his deceased wife, dying alone, scared and in such
pain. ‘I’ll not let yer down agen…’ he said quietly as the tears began to roll
down his face.
‘Please... please…,’ the girl struggled to speak startling
Jed from his thoughts. ‘Gath…,’ she
whispered. The wolf snapped its head
around and stared intently at the girl.
‘Save my baby, he wants my baby…,’ she pleaded as her life finally ebbed
away.
The dawn had at last arrived bathing the scene with its
promise of light and warmth and the day, one of the first nice days of the very
late spring was going to be a good one as Jed held the dead body of the girl to
his chest and wept into her hair.
‘Girl, I can’t save yer baby,’ he said quietly, ‘it be gone
now… it be with you.’ The wolf howled as
Jed wept with a prayer for her soul’s journey but just as he was about to put
the body down he felt a violent kick in his stomach, in his astonishment he let
the body of the girl fall to the ground with a thump. The girl’s stomach was moving… ‘The child be still livin’!’ Jed exclaimed
hurriedly pulling aside her clothes and feeling her wet belly, the child inside
kicked against his hand. He reached for
the girl’s wrist to feel for a pulse or sign of life as all the time her belly
moved and kicked, the movements growing weaker and weaker as Jed worked on the
mother.
Taking his father’s knife he gently felt the sharp blade, I can do this… he thought, knowing he
had birthed animals this way before, but
then the mother’s were always alive, is this right? He asked himself, the morality of the
situation clouding his mind.
‘Blue, should I let the child go with its ma?’ He asked, wrought with indecision. The wolf moved down beside the man it had
already saved twice, it looked into Jed’s eyes and whined before gently licking
his face.
‘SAVE IT.’ Jed
heard. Nodding silently, Jed gently
sliced the dead flesh open, through the skin, through the muscle wall and into
the womb. He had to hurry, the child had
no time, but still he took his time. I will save this child… he thought as in
his mind’s eye, he could see his dead wife smiling at him. Discarding the knife, he reached between the
bloody walls of the girl’s womb and felt for the infant. It feebly punched at his hand. Gently he pulled the small fragile body free
of its mother’s corpse and tied off the cord attaching it to its dead mother
with thread taken from the handle of his father’s knife. Satisfied the knot was secure he cut the cord
sharply, feeling the heat of the cord blood running over his fingers. Holding the child by the ankles, he gently
slapped its bottom; upside down, the tiny child still covered in blood and
cream opened its eyes and screamed in anger.
Tears of laughter, sadness at the loss of the mother and joy of new life
filled Jed’s heart as he gently wrapped the tiny gore covered child in his coat
and placed the screaming bundle on the floor beside the wolf.
‘Watch the babe Blue, whilst I see to its ma,’ he said, as
he tenderly began to cover the body of the young dead girl with the old
blanket. Noticing a small silver and
crystal amulet around the girl’s neck, he removed it and put it carefully into
his pocket, thinking to give it to the child later.
‘I got ter leave yer like this if I’m ter see ter yer boy,
I’m sorry,’ he said as he brushed the hair from the girl’s face and closed the
still open eyes. ‘I’m sorry I couldn’t
save you too, I’ll be back in a few days an’ I’ll bury yer proper like then,’
he said as he kissed the girl’s brow and reverently covered her face whispering
a second prayer for her soul on its Final Journey.
So...
What do you think? Wish me luck it's the biggest competition of its kind anywhere!
Oh on another note, Hetty the hen has arrived and is comfortably ensconced in her new home. I'll post a little bit more about her in my next update!
Now off to Zumba Zumba!
Byeeeee........... til next time. :)
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